We are showing you Rana and Thao's show not tell sentences. Try and guess both Thao and Ranas emtions. We were learning about inferring. So we wrote our own sentences to get our readers to make and inference.
My Heart was racing like a chettah.It felt like its inside my heart pounding extreamly hard.I felt butterfly's pulling a huge knot inside my stomach my eyes are wide open. By Thao
As I walked through the dark spooky alleyway at night I saw skeletons hanging from the roof tops and dead birds on the floor. I could hear pure black crows squeaking and funeral music in the backround. By Rana
1.you were extremely scared or knowing that something awfully scaring is going to happen
ReplyDelete2.your in the most scariest spooky house ever
from awanya
DeleteWow, what fantastic show, don't tell examples. I am thinking that you Thao is nervous and Rana is scared??
ReplyDeleteGreat show don't tell. You should put together a short movie including these - creates great suspense
ReplyDeleteI think runa's one is scared, thao's one is nervous.
ReplyDeleteby:Ashmit
I think runa's one is scared, thao's one is nervous.
ReplyDeleteby:Ashmit